TheBeagle's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Screw Up Part 1]

Random humor

Make more parts and I'll vote 5 for a week.

JujubeLock responds:

oh ok

[Deal, The]

Alright

Original and action-packed. I like how you made the dealer completely black. Nice style there.

However the graphics sucked. Work on that. You have lots of potential.

6/10

Keep them coming.

Nerd-101 responds:

I can draw good with pen and paper. I'll probably just trace my storyboard and animate in Flash next time (if i can be bothered.) Thnx for constructive criticism

[Tell Me You Love Me]

Nice

Wow, pretty good job. Very nice, Mrs.

The graphics were overall pretty good, but I suggest using a thicker pen tool for the graphics instead of the brush.

Some of the animation was a bit slow, work on transitions (like fading in and out) and you'll be fine.

Keep it coming.

~Iron_Fries

Bomee responds:

haha :) I'm a Miss XD

omg i usually use transitions, but i got so lazy ! :) thanx!!

[She Made Me Do It]

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Oh c'mon man. You have potential. Use it!

You can do better!!!

soixantedeux responds:

Don't worry, will do.

[CC - Where'd It Go?]

Bland

A bit boring.

Graphics were alright and yeah. I'm not sure if this deserved FP.

Keep practicing. You have potential.

TheCatsPajamas responds:

I have other movies you know. Quit acting like this is my first submission.

[LW: The Community Pt.1]

Not very funny...

Don't get me wrong, the animation was good. But I still hated this movie.

Theres just no substance to it; whats the point?

Keep on making movies though, you're very good at making graphics.

Wonchop responds:

Well, I'm glad you liked the actual part I worked on

[Jack in the Box ep. 1]

Not much substance...

Didn't like this much.

Keep practicing. You're good.

LilDwarf responds:

thanks....I guess

[We Are So England]

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Its kind of sucktacular...the graphics werent very good, the sound needed work, but you have potential. I thought it was funny though because the idea was pretty good. It was better than other stuff.

Keep practicing, you have potential!!!

~Iron_Fries

Battosai810 responds:

Yeah, my mic sucks, and I'm getting the hang of multi-segmented characters. Thanks for the feedback!

[The Audition pt 1]

Firthy..

Needs work but you have a shitload of potential. Keep it coming!

RedHotPoker responds:

Thanks.

[Breakin' Buds]

Humor is good but better voice acting/ graphics

This reminds of some of the MTV cartoons.

The humor is great but PLEASE change from the pen tool to a good brush or, at best, make your pen lines a little bigger and then also make your characters movie clips and make it so that they squiggly move (KIND OF LIKE HOW MARC. M OF SICK ANIMATONS DOES HIS or HOW SALAD FINGERS HAS HIS TEXT).

If you had the characters squiggly with slightly bigger pencil lines the graphics would be perfect for the humor your pulling off.

You have lots of potential and if you follow my advice I'll vote 5 on this for a week.

Good job.

~Iron_Fries

Ryan-Smith responds:

I really can't draw that well so those changes would be hard for me, but I will try to make them if they make the flash better.