Definetely a good cartoon
This was a great submission. It was highly original with a lot of style of old detective comics/radioshows and the storyline and narration was spot on.
The graphics for the mos part were original and good (however I'd stay away from too much gradient and 1 size lines from now on).
The sound was very scenic and set the mood and the fighting scene was very well animated. Good work.
Crit for crit?
~TheBeagle
Thanks for the very helpful review! I'll se what happens with the gradients in the future... I kindy played around this time ^^.
Mmm
At first I was skeptical of this movie but it truly is good once you get past the first few scenes. The jokes however were pretty shitty at the beginning and the plot was a bit stale at first as well.
However, it was long and developed well.
The graphics were poor all around but at the saem time the backgrounds were full of texture so they weren't lackluster to their own standards.
Good job, just improve on graphics and jokes. The plot saved this :)
~Thebeagle
P.s.: Watch my Just Slime : )
Good Review. The first scene was actually a scene from an incomplete project I did 6 months before the initial start of this production. It tied in well so we decided to use it. I am hearing a lot about graphic improvements, so that is something I am taking into consideration. I personally liked most of the jokes (moreso in the second half) but a lot of them will be improved in the future as well (I'm relying a lot less on pop culture spoofs in the next production).
Thanks for the review.
P.S. "Just Slime" is alright by me.
LOL!
That was stylish and very good!
~Thebeagle
Pretty good
Not bad man.
I see as you a front-page artist some day. Just keep practicing and you'll get even better animation : )
Good cartoon here however at times it was a bit boring witout actual voice-overs so if you are going to do a 3rd episode you should include voices.
Graphics were sub-par. You need to improve on that and lose the out-of-place gradients. HOWEVER, the silver gradients were really 3d looking.
Good job.
Really good
This was kind of an alternative cartoon with hints of anime and 70's styled cartoons. Really good stuff and the little bits of stereotype sexuality of attractive women made earthquake girl a hilarious character.
Good job.
Lol at sharper
Sharper, Jerry Jackson is not a real person.
He is simply David Firth high pitching his voice and putting out a hilarious, yet shitty cartoon.
Anyways still very funny.
Lazy MuffiN!!
Lazy Muffin you rock, man!
You have been one of my favorite flash artists for a long time. You are so original in your comic style, I just love it.
Keep making cartoons man!
~TheBeagle
Usually..
Videos are never good quality.
But this one was hilarious and very original! Man where can I get some of this?
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